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Chapter 3 - My True Bliss

PLEASE READ! sorry, there really nice poems and i want a second opinion on them

commentin wudn't hurt either ^^

Chapter 3 - My True Bliss

Chapter 3 - My True Bliss
my true bliss

alone
dark
silent
the sound of my heart beating against my chest
sweat trickliing down my face,
blood
everywhere
around me
on me
is me
the knife slowly but painfully breaking away the skin on my wrist of my own,
watching the thick substance slowly slide down my arm
...my true bliss
feeling my skin turning pale
lying lifeless in my own stream of blood, slowly fading away
away from my life
leaving me alone, in the dark
alone,
with only my own blood, taking over me
slowly taking over me
sitting there with a knife in my hand, cutting my self slowly
pain
feeling it
controling me
tears running down my cheeks as i drop the knife and fall back
closing my eyes.. for the last time
slowly fading away....away from the pain....the hurt....the tears....finding my true place in life
Death

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FFXgirl on May 4, 2006, 6:33:11 AM

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FFXgirlSad but GOOD!!! *favs*

archeological-mania on September 22, 2005, 8:57:43 AM

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archeological-maniaawwwww...
this one is sad.
but still, you have are good with words and rhymes. very good!!
favs*

Kid_Kairi on August 26, 2005, 1:46:01 PM

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Kid_Kairiwow keep writing very deep and Dark i like